Nice
I find the techno sounds in the begining half to be making more of a noisy clatter than smooth music, but it certanly is a nice idea though a bit repedative... Mix it up a bit! Add in new mellodys and have a variety of instruments play in now and then, and try letting different instruments take turns as the lead! :)
It's an awsome piece
Nice tune! I make music with FL Studio also (the demo)! You might consider extending this song. It's really good and has a lot of potential to be even better if you were make it longer. Your not too bad at trance (I think... I'm not entirely sure I know how trance should sound) You should definately try this genre more often. And I think I'll take a look at your other songs u may hav
Pretty Cool
It sounds simple but something about it I REALLY like! What tracks u use? and how much of the song is your doing? Its funny the way you say "This music program is Filled with little easter eggs! (Figuratively speaking of course)" lol as if the easter bunny could really electronicaly pay you a visit. XD
Nice work! I think I'll download it and maybe check into GarageBand too! Ya know if it'll work on Windows 7?
The Computer was a Mac, and from what i hear GB only works on Macs or I'd have it back too... =/ I was using pre-made tracks only, i just positioned them and manipulated the way they were heard, like changing the same instrument to be heard as it was meant to be originally, and the other under "electronic guitar"
Hey I'd like to help
ok so I'll keep this review short and sweet! The part before the piano does not seem to have much of a direction until the piano kicks in. I love the piano and it's melody. You could very well improve it by building up more on it and working towarrd that seriouse, bold, and exciting feelings that the piano creates! I love it very much! But it cuts off just when it gets good... :'(
Hey can ya do me a favor and pm me when you finish this or make more like it? :D
Yeah, I don't much like this song besides the ending part. :) I'm going to finish it once my computer is fixed! >:3 Thank you so much for your review! :D I'll pm you as soon as it's finished. :)
I downloaded!
great! I'm not too familliar with House music but I like wat I hear!
Very funny
I like it. it kinda made me laugh. "Fantastic plastic machine, 'tastic-plastic..." LOL lyrics are great! But this great song get a 9 however cuz I'v heard other dance music with more melody/music-ness but I guess it might then would make it harder to listen to the lyrics with too many sounds at once... I don't know really... nice work any ways! Newgrounds certainly can use more music with lyrics
Wuznt goin to but oh well
the song it's self isnt bad at all. Its not exactly soothing and the complete pauses in it are kinda awkward in my opinion-theyr just too long it feels... but I like you effort and the melody is a nice idea and start! All you need to do now is build up a little more on it. Like add some strings in the back ground- not too loud though- just something that gives that soft and smooth and flowing skin over wat seems to be right now the bare bones of a music piece. you know wat i mean? Anyways thats just wat I'd do. I noticed youre just like me. I also love reviews and comments too! I'll check out your account and other music you got and review some, Im gettin tired early tonight, But I'd also love it if you'd listen and write reviews for my submitions too. Who knows, maybe we can keep in contact in the future
Thanks for a well-thought-out review. The advice is much appreciated. I'll have to make sure to check out some of your stuff too. :)
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I Love Fallout 3, and New Vagas!! Great song thing!
I could easily make a short machinima/music video to this. Hey and if I do I'll be sure let you know first thing
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I don't really do music anymore. I'm primarily working to build a career in animation now. If you wish to use my music I don't mind. Just let me know about it and credit me.
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